Draft-15.txt references

[Stuart Cheshire]

Over the course of the next week, ending June 15, 2004, please
review the latest internet draft specifying IPv4LL. The goal is
* to verify the changes we have agreed upon
* to find any additional typographic or technical errors

Some final editorial comments on the references:

Is RFC 792 normative? (Is ICMP a required prerequisite to implementing
IPv4LL?) I think not.

Is RFC 2434 normative? (Is knowing how to write an IANA Considerations
Section a prerequisite to implementing IPv4LL?) I think not.

The informative references still include 802.1d and 1394 but the text
that referenced them is now gone.

That's it.

Stuart Cheshire <***@apple.com>
* Wizard Without Portfolio, Apple Computer, Inc.
* www.stuartcheshire.org

[Erik Guttman]

Post by Stuart Cheshire

Over the course of the next week, ending June 15, 2004, please
review the latest internet draft specifying IPv4LL. The goal is
* to verify the changes we have agreed upon
* to find any additional typographic or technical errors

Is RFC 792 normative? (Is ICMP a required prerequisite to implementing
IPv4LL?) I think not.

It is normative because ICMP message fields are cited in section 3.3.

Post by Stuart Cheshire
Is RFC 2434 normative? (Is knowing how to write an IANA Considerations
Section a prerequisite to implementing IPv4LL?) I think not.

It is normative as we use terminology from this document in the IANA
considerations section, Section 8.

Post by Stuart Cheshire
The informative references still include 802.1d and 1394 but the text
that referenced them is now gone.

We can drop these references in that case. Proposal:

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Section 10.1

From:
[802.1d] ISO/IEC 15802-3 Information technology - Telecommunications
and information exchange between systems - Local and
metropolitan area networks - Common specifications - Part 3:
Media access Control (MAC) Bridges, (also ANSI/IEEE Std
802.1D-1998), 1998.

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Section 10.1

From:
[1394] Standard for a High Performance Serial Bus. Institute of
Electrical and Electronic Engineers, IEEE Standard 1394-1995,


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Best regards,

Erik